Tuesday, 15 November 2011

Treatment of Story



The story is about, boy and girl who are fallen in deep ocean love sea through online and how do they get rid off certain hard circumstances passing through time to time.. And finally, how do they patch up their broken hearts by reconciling their love journey bring out happy ending…


Here the story starts.. Its about the boy called Nic who is Advertising and Media student (21 year old) graduating in Goa and he is Christian who comes from poor family background. And the girl called Madhu, who is graduating in Digital Media coming from wealthy family who lives in Hyderabad but she won’t have much attention in home from her families. So she is little upset, childish and lack of love.. The story begins with Nic and Madhu hugging each other near by Saroor Nagar lake view emotionally until the evening ends with beautiful sunshine. As softly voice over narration will start of Madhu that “Life is mystery we don’t know what happens?? But we must accept everything which is coming to you I think my life is gifted but???” the movie will start with Titles fading in and out of screen along with “Skype messenger caller tone” as background music for titles. As the titles finishes off, Madhu’s best friend called Kalyani face will appear first who will sit very dull and she slowly looks around Madhu who is lying on bed with tears. And kalyani smiles at once as she keeps on says “I hate this online dating, you don’t know what will happen so please do not believe this stuff its useless”..  Madhu will reply her that “I did not expect he will cheat me by dating simultaneously another girl through online itself its a heart break journey”. At some point, people will think that she is talking about Nic. But within a next minute Madhu blows out this way “Steve, if you visible to me I will kill you..” she shares with Kalyani “You know what dear?? He left out with dog for ride ad did not return online back for some days I thought he might have lost his way with dog but after some days he has uploaded the wedding pics of him in Myspace page”.. So Kalyani will laugh out loud and she says “Relax Madhu as the time passes by, everything you will forget one day you will get one boy who will care your feelings and who will love you with his heart. Don’t worry”..

The scene fades out, and Nic will be introducing next. His introduction scene will start with his eyes moving from left to right and with voice over narration that “I love girls who will have black hair, and who have large eyes. She must be industrious, she must be studious, and she should understand me I must connect myself to her” slowly camera zooms out and it seem he will update all that information into his Facebook profile. Randomly, he will see at Madhu’s page and he will give her friend request mentioning that “Hi I am Nic I am so sorry to bother you, but I want to make friends with you.. My email ID is Nicholas2000@yahoo.com I hope you can add me there”. Next day, Madhu will check her updates in Facebook and she will accept his request.. Nic notices that, and he suddenly buzzes Madhu in order to chat with her. At beginning Madhu wont pay attention to him, and she leaves away chat.. She won’t care him much. Nic will also take it easy as he won’t mind at all. One fine Sunday, Madhu comes to online on Facebook, Nic notices it and he will buzz her on. Madhu will reply him back casually. As the time passes by, Madhu and Nic both will prolong their chat because, they pass on same interests and same tastes. Nic asks favor to Madhu that he could chat with her through webcam on Skype. Madhu accepts him and she starts Skype. Nic will fall in love with her eyes when he sees her at fraction of second. Madhu will also fall in love with Nic’s way of talking style, but they don’t reveal out their feelings.. As the time passes by, they will fall in love at the same time unknowingly. And when their relationship starts, everything will go on great. Nic will be one loyal lover to her. He posts all his updates, he takes pictures wherever he goes, and he shares with Madhu. He updates Madhus photos in his profile and he openly dedicates his love to Madhu.. Their relationship will be like one made in heaven. But it won’t remain until the time fades out dry again. Nic will pass out his exams of his first term and he decides to go hometown for vacations to meet his parents. He informs Madhu that he will be giving all the updates. But when he goes back to hometown, for few days he will not message Madhu. He will disappear from online and Madhu will be constantly waiting for his updates. She will sit in front of PC for hours and hours.. After few days, Nic will message Madhu that “Dear I am fine here I hope your fine there, I am sorry I was bit busy” Madhu reads his messages and she will freak out at once.. Actually Nic thinks that Madhu won’t wait for him . But by seeing Madhu’s attitude he gets afraid that she might not have much patience for him. So Nic says “Listen dear, for time being, I cannot come to online because I will be busy in future with my studies I am so sorry may be we have to break up this relationship otherwise you will be upset with me in future”.. Madhu gets afraid of loosing him and she gets hyper tensed with the tension she will get fever that next day. Kalyani buzzes Nic and she asks him to apologies her for what he has done. Nic will realize that she got fever and he decides to make comeback. In order to make her happy, he will also say that “I told my families about you they have accepted you”.. Madhu will become active and she trusts him..
 After that, relationship will go on well, but as the time passes by Nic will become busy with his studies again. Madhu will get terribly upset and she tells to Nic “You’re ignoring me as you promised me you would spare time on me”. Although Nic daily sends his updates with short sentences Madhu wont be happy with his actions. She demands him to spare on her time.. Nic will obey her demands calmly and he spares time on her. But he will loose education gradually. Through this way he will also loose his friends and his daily life activities. Although, he thinks to share with Madhu about his interests but he is afraid that she might fall sick again. Nic will be upset with his relationship, and he decides to not come online for few days… As Nic, becomes unavailable Madhu will be tensed and heart bats will raise fast... She asks Nic’s friends to give his updates but they pretend that they don’t know anything about him. Furious Madhu will give message to Nic that “Listen; if you don’t come to online I will rot my face and I will kill myself. Because what is my life without you??”. Nic will be worried and he will immediately buzz her on. Madhu will start to weep loudly and she asks him “Why are you ignoring me??”. Nic will look at window outside and then he tells her to be calm down. Nic starts his words towards Madhu “What do you know about my condition here?? I am poor I am not rich, I must care my families when I went back to hometown, I did part time job to earn money. I have no money for buying clothes also at least. I can’t travel places, I can’t pay my college fees, I lost my best friends because of love… I want to share with you, but you will always fall down sick so I cared about you. But your demands are high I could not endure. And you know what?? You live far away from me; you don’t know anything about my lifestyle here. My family is broken my dad has divorced my mom. And I did not tell anything about you to my families I lied to you so that you will be fine.. Love is space; love is not tying up with two hands tight and locking up heart in cage. You don’t give me freedom to share, and talk with anyone.. I am tired of love”.. Madhu will be shocked and she won’t say anything. She will silently cut off the call and she says “Okay we will talk tomorrow”.. That next day, Madhu will give one big email to Nic with touching words and finally she will reveal out that she wants to break up with him only for the sake of him. Nic will get tears and he will shut down PC. That next minute his door bell rings, and there will be surprise courier package for Nic that he got Teddy bear gift from Madhu which is her favorite doll since childhood. The moment he receives her gifts, he will cry out loud and he will loose Madhu also. After few years, Madhu will be graduated successfully and she will earn money for herself. But since that incident took place, Madhu will transform into better human being and she becomes like matured person. She sits near by her favorite lake, opens her personal diary to write down her emotions and when she turns around, Nic stands in front of her she will be surprised. He hugs her immediately and he will think in his heart “I have come for you I cant endure pain after all, I completed my graduation I came with my own money”. Madhu will also hug him . Thus the beginning scene will play back to final scene again. Therefore, the movie will end with soft tone of voice narration of Nic saying that “Honey, I will never leave you away. I will be with you forever until the end of Universe.. Smile To Your Life I am here in your heart forever” Thus the dairy pages flips off.. The End.. 

The reason why I have chosen the last concept, because this is my real life story and the character called Nic is the real person who gave me immense love and who full filled my life with colors of joy. I was the girl who was childish and on the scale of 10 in selfish zone, and I was the girl who always thought my side is negative and had no hopes of leading life at all.. I was the girl who is lack of love from everywhere. Sometimes, I really see my friends who have wonderful life and they have big gang of friends who all care about them. But unfortunately, I am not one of them. In fact I was not optimistic person, but I was really not strong either. I used to go down and I used to fall down. No high spirits and I never sacrificed anything for good. But just wondering about myself and never cared about other’s wishes. I changed slowly; I changed completely at least 98%... I did not know who brought this change??? But it was Nic who did this to me.. I am sure he did this to me. Because, he is completely down to earth. He is not selfish, he is not weak he is optimistic person and he is full of life.. Nic taught me, how to be strong; he taught me how to love myself, he taught me what is the value of life. Even though he stays far away from me, his traits really inspired me. Because, he used to work in part time jobs, at the same time he also did hard study just to take care of his families. But even though, he has harsh speaker dad, he never harmed himself although, my mom speaks to me very harsh and sometimes I lack my confidence at home staying with my family because they restrict neither encourage me. But Nic knows how to deal with life still. He cares everyone he cherishes everyone. He knows that he loves me although he is not expressive, but he still knows that he cannot live without me. Nic is having me as his lover for the first time. But he is still responsible person in the tender age of 22. Because, he respects my feelings… And I slowly transformed as better human being after being in relationship with him. Only just because I knew the value of life, he never harmed me and he never hurt me. He has always talked to me very kind. And its miracle even though it long distance, whenever I am sad, whenever I am happy he just figures out what I am really doing??? The care that he showered on me I guess no one has did that before

Long distance relationships are very difficult to handle though, majority of people have faced failure relationships in online sites. But few of them have been succeeded. Long distance relationship has one beautiful essence. If we really miss someone how it would be? We will always feel the missing of partners and we would share all our joys and sorrows with our partners. No matter how far they are living??? But we will feel like whatever we do we wanted to dedicate that to our partners. Every moment that we share will be always staying like beautiful memory, and the curiosity to meet our partners will pump up in our hearts.. We always dream of them in one room and we feel like we wanted to accompany them even in dreams. And these days, love is growing so hype but breakups are going very hype. I have seen most of the cases in my friend’s lives but my friends have been influenced to negative shades of love that “This love is bullshit”. But Love is beautiful and it is one fairytale land unless we will have mutual understanding and unless we give freedom and space to each other. Trust is most important. And being responsible to each other is also important factor. I want to show through my movie that, long distance relationship is not infatuation neither attractive, but its also beautiful when you trust your partner when you always feel that your soul is with them and when you give each other enough space and freedom in every aspect. Love is not only romance, but love is also responsibility that what we need to realize… We must be always strong to make sure that our partner is not worried about us.  Love is beautiful when you learn how to sacrifice. Always we have to smile to our lives. Even though you’re far away, just cherish your every moment with your love. But never screw up because of something else. 

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