I think After reading about making of short films all these days, I have got one fair idea from everyone's experience that, to make good story you can describe the important lead roles in detail so that you can figure out the proper shaped story line. I guess I had to do it. So now, I came out with the character description of hero in my movie.. Whose name is "Nic" he is Christian guy. Here it starts in this way. Girl meets boy, and girl gets into misunderstandings with him because of his traits.
Nic is faire, looks very young even though he is adult aged around 22. He is University Student and has spectacles on eyes. He has ordinary appearance not much fashionable. He appears to be like studios man. The face is very serious, but it look still cute because of round shaped structure. He is thin but appears to be strong man because of his slight muscles that covers the body. He is dedicated to work. Height is average and has extreme black hair with bouncy feel, its straight therefore silky. He loves singing and passion about movies. he has great social life because of the companion that he got with N-number of friends. He is very kind towards them, that he accepts every one of his friend like brother and sister. He is very adorable towards the society.Perhaps everyone loves to make friendship with him. He loves playing Basketball,travelling and cooking. He is also interested in knowing about current economical state and political system of world.
Besides this, he is also good at gathering the on-going fashion updates. He is very much descent boy who is completely away from party animals, disco nights, late night sleeps, smoking and flirting with girls. But he loves to drink little beer whenever he feels cold or stressed. Therefore, he seem to be like gentleman. He has strong heart attitude. He never cries, never frustrates. Instead, he is super optimistic person who believes in himself. Sometimes he does act like a self absorbed person. He has complicated family background, with his divorced parents and leads life independently with the memories of his late brother who died in early age of 18 due to blood cancer. He never adores his father much, ever since his mother and brother left the family. He has one step mother who treats him badly in such a way that whenever he goes back to home, he never gets proper meals from her. He is attached to his late brother so he does always miss him. He comes from poor family, this is the key reason that he has higher ambitions to earn millions of money. He never rested down and he does not have ordinary life. He is forced to earn money along with study career. He is completely responsible person. He is very honest, never hides his feelings towards anyone. If he has something, he will tell him upfront what they are, just like kind of straight forward person. He loves to enjoy the life with no rules ans restrictions. He is the person who starves for freedom. He always thinks in one way of his track. and says himself "I am myself that is all". He has rarely mood swings. Sometimes, no one can guess why is he sad. He just knows himself that is because of his own family issues.
Even though, Nic lives in dorm, he still have to face some painful consequences. For example, whenever his dad calls him up he first greets his son with stupid abusing words, that makes Nic mind messed up whole day and he will become duller. He is very hard man to move on. He does not want the life to be end up like this.. Although he appears to be strong , he still seems to be like sensitive person. He has one great thing in him that he always endures. No matter how much the problem is big, he never shares with anyone because he cares about other;s feelings that he is afraid they might involve into his problems. So he hides his sadness all the time. He is die heart fan of Jackie chan and has great passion on Kung Fu. He has one big dream that he wanted to become singer. He always sings and tries to upload his songs in his personal blog.
Totally, this kid belongs to himself but what happens when he falls in love? Although he does not know how to cherish his lover but he is extreme loyal person to his girlfriend and never cheats her. He is also very less expressive because he has never experienced love life before. He was truly shy kid, but after the reflections of love that falls in his soul, he will learn how to love. But he knows himself that he loves her all with heart. the problem still rises in between them. Because, the first key point is, Family pressure, earning money, loking after his half brothers too. Who is been forced very badly by his father, helpless situations therefore he forgets to cherish his love-life. This is the central problem in my story that I want to implement.
And the second central problem is, due to enduring his pain and he wont share anything with his girlfriend. Therefore he behaves very strange sometimes although its long distance so she will not understand him sometimes. This leads to misunderstandings in her thoughts that he might be not interested in her anymore. And on top of that, Nic also has high temper that he always bursts on his girlfriend whenever she craves him for love.. So how his girlfriend can deal with his temper?? This may also lead to break up..
So taking out these two elements I thought to implement in my story which will be dramatic and effective for screenplay. Perhaps I am still learning how to use punching dialogues yet. Ok so this is it.. Is it a good idea? Or if you all have any suggestions you can comment on it here..
Nic is faire, looks very young even though he is adult aged around 22. He is University Student and has spectacles on eyes. He has ordinary appearance not much fashionable. He appears to be like studios man. The face is very serious, but it look still cute because of round shaped structure. He is thin but appears to be strong man because of his slight muscles that covers the body. He is dedicated to work. Height is average and has extreme black hair with bouncy feel, its straight therefore silky. He loves singing and passion about movies. he has great social life because of the companion that he got with N-number of friends. He is very kind towards them, that he accepts every one of his friend like brother and sister. He is very adorable towards the society.Perhaps everyone loves to make friendship with him. He loves playing Basketball,travelling and cooking. He is also interested in knowing about current economical state and political system of world.
Besides this, he is also good at gathering the on-going fashion updates. He is very much descent boy who is completely away from party animals, disco nights, late night sleeps, smoking and flirting with girls. But he loves to drink little beer whenever he feels cold or stressed. Therefore, he seem to be like gentleman. He has strong heart attitude. He never cries, never frustrates. Instead, he is super optimistic person who believes in himself. Sometimes he does act like a self absorbed person. He has complicated family background, with his divorced parents and leads life independently with the memories of his late brother who died in early age of 18 due to blood cancer. He never adores his father much, ever since his mother and brother left the family. He has one step mother who treats him badly in such a way that whenever he goes back to home, he never gets proper meals from her. He is attached to his late brother so he does always miss him. He comes from poor family, this is the key reason that he has higher ambitions to earn millions of money. He never rested down and he does not have ordinary life. He is forced to earn money along with study career. He is completely responsible person. He is very honest, never hides his feelings towards anyone. If he has something, he will tell him upfront what they are, just like kind of straight forward person. He loves to enjoy the life with no rules ans restrictions. He is the person who starves for freedom. He always thinks in one way of his track. and says himself "I am myself that is all". He has rarely mood swings. Sometimes, no one can guess why is he sad. He just knows himself that is because of his own family issues.
Even though, Nic lives in dorm, he still have to face some painful consequences. For example, whenever his dad calls him up he first greets his son with stupid abusing words, that makes Nic mind messed up whole day and he will become duller. He is very hard man to move on. He does not want the life to be end up like this.. Although he appears to be strong , he still seems to be like sensitive person. He has one great thing in him that he always endures. No matter how much the problem is big, he never shares with anyone because he cares about other;s feelings that he is afraid they might involve into his problems. So he hides his sadness all the time. He is die heart fan of Jackie chan and has great passion on Kung Fu. He has one big dream that he wanted to become singer. He always sings and tries to upload his songs in his personal blog.
Totally, this kid belongs to himself but what happens when he falls in love? Although he does not know how to cherish his lover but he is extreme loyal person to his girlfriend and never cheats her. He is also very less expressive because he has never experienced love life before. He was truly shy kid, but after the reflections of love that falls in his soul, he will learn how to love. But he knows himself that he loves her all with heart. the problem still rises in between them. Because, the first key point is, Family pressure, earning money, loking after his half brothers too. Who is been forced very badly by his father, helpless situations therefore he forgets to cherish his love-life. This is the central problem in my story that I want to implement.
And the second central problem is, due to enduring his pain and he wont share anything with his girlfriend. Therefore he behaves very strange sometimes although its long distance so she will not understand him sometimes. This leads to misunderstandings in her thoughts that he might be not interested in her anymore. And on top of that, Nic also has high temper that he always bursts on his girlfriend whenever she craves him for love.. So how his girlfriend can deal with his temper?? This may also lead to break up..
So taking out these two elements I thought to implement in my story which will be dramatic and effective for screenplay. Perhaps I am still learning how to use punching dialogues yet. Ok so this is it.. Is it a good idea? Or if you all have any suggestions you can comment on it here..
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| The feelings of girl missing her boyfriend because he wont come online as he is very busy man that sometimes he forgets to message her. So she cries next day when she talks to him He showers his high temper on her and he thinks she did not understand him so she feels lonely and miserable.. The sketch was done by me.. |
haan good idea!!!! hope u could make a good screenplay successfully! good luck sweetie!
ReplyDeletei like Nic....the Character looks promising but for a feature length movie... i kno its not a screenplay yet but to establish all that u thought for the character is gonna take lot of ur movie length dont u think so....? just a thought.
ReplyDeleteand one point is confusing u firstly said he is not much fashionable and then u stated later that he is also good at gathering the on-going fashion updates....
i would go with the second ending which could add more drama to ur plot.
i actually expected u would do more of girls perspective of the situation rather than the guy`s version.